Please update soon. Have a nice weekend.
Please, update as soon as you can. Have a nice day.
I want to read more. Is the Council involved? What will happen when Kendra arrives?...Please, update as soon as you can. Have a nice day.
Author's Response:I just realized I messed up, and mixed up the 22nd and 23rd chapters. As pennance, I will be rectifying the situation, and adding an extra chapter today.
I like this story so please update as soon as you can. Have a nice day.
Please update as soon as you can. I would like to read more.
This last part was a bit confusing for me, so I will wait for the next chapter to know more.
Author's Response:The last part is an attempt on my part to bring an outside point of view, from someone outside of the Scoobies, and their immediate circle.
I like this story and I liked the chapter. Please update as soon as you can.
Author's Response:I'm glad the story is interesting for you.
Please update as soon as you can. I would like to read more.
Author's Response:Glad you liked, My plan is to post twice a week, but sometimes that won't be possible.
I'm liking this story a lot and I want to read more, so please update as soon as you can.
Author's Response:Sorry for the delay, but I will try to be more regular with updates.
Another amazing chapter! I love that you have Hank being a good dad, I almost never see that happening. Not gonna lie, I'm really looking forward to seeing Spike go from calling Buffy "little girl" all condescending to "pet" and "love" all adoring lol. I hope you decide to contine this, because it really is such a great au you have going here. Thank you for sharing, I've had a great time reading!
Author's Response:Thank you very much. I'll try to remember to update regularly, since the fic is actually finished (and even has a WIP sequel).
I was so excited I clicked next chapter and then had to go back cause I didn't review 😅 I looove this one- Spike's anger, pretending to be her boyfriend, all of it. Also good to know for sure we are in between 1 and 2 lol. Okay now Im gonna go read the next one!
Author's Response:Happy to see you're enjoying.
"I can kill her any time, I just don't feeeeeel like it right now" 😂 Spike denial vibes are always so funny. I'm interested in why Buffy's in LA (is this the summer between seasons 1 and 2?), what changes you've made to canon now if it's later than that.
One tiny note- you have a typo, liked instead of licked in the sentence that starts with "Lowering his mouth to her throat". Figured I'd let you know <3
Author's Response:Yes, this is the summer between S1 and S2, when she went to spend time with her dad per canon. Glad you enjoyed.
Thanks for the 'heads up'.
Okay I'll start with the gushiness because ohmylord that last line got meee. And Spike unintentionally writing poetry about her the second she's alive again? So good. So so so good.
The less gushiness- look, I know you're probably right about the Angel thing but I I could've gone my WHOLE life never thinking about it 🤣 I visibly shuddered when Spike spouted that line off in front of Buffy in the cave. Bleugh lol
On to the next chapter!
Author's Response:Considering where Buffy's mind was at that point in the first season, she needed a dose of reality about her 'maybe-boyfriend'. Glad you liked.
I truly enjoyed this first chapter! I cannot wait to see what follows next!
Author's Response:Thank you, I hope you enjoiy.
Excellent chapter. I'm definitely looking forward to more.
Author's Response:Thank you
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