Reviews For The Umbrella Initiative


Name: Saranac (Anonymous) · Date: 06/09/2022 10:56 · For: Chapter Five

Well this sure beat chaining Buffy up and threatening to sic Dru on her! LOL

The ripples from the virus continue with the biggest one continuing to be the joining spell. It's had a large affect on Spike but also Buffy, especially in self-awareness. He's a vampire, and this time Buffy isn't holding Spike to the same expectations as originally. This time Buffy knows him well enough to trust her gut and take a second look on a situation before judging harshly.

Meanwhile Spike is making progress in finding a middle ground between pleasing his demon and adjusting to his new place in life. Now if only there wasn't a deadly virus outbreak. Loving this =)



Name: Saranac (Anonymous) · Date: 06/09/2022 10:55 · For: Chapter Four

I really like how you have Buffy and Spike able to share dreams. The two haven't always been the best at communicating, it's fun that they are able to manage communicating in dreams better than talking in the real world. Looking forward to reading what happens next...



Name: Green (Anonymous) · Date: 06/09/2022 10:53 · For: Prologue

She could see his heart, exposed and making little shivery motions. Huh. It didn’t beat, but it clearly did something. 😳 OMG !! Poor Spike. And those things Adam put in him !! 🤮 NASTY !!!!

👍Cool with the dream, just as freaky as the original.

And here I thought Walsh was already pretty evil. 🙁 This bitch is out there !!

Wonderful 💚



Name: Saranac (Anonymous) · Date: 06/09/2022 10:52 · For: Prologue

Oh snap - it's about to hit the fan.
Time to to have a good old fashioned zombie Sunnydale!



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